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My latest song - AIN'T LYIN'

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Mudcat

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AINT LYIN


Plans are moving forward get used to it
Without your consultations I aint lyin
Train is long gone down the track get used to it
You caint never bring it back I aint lyin

You cant fight it
Theres a party and you aint invited
Gotta deal with that aint lyin, aint lyin



Wolves are camping at your door get used to it
Theyre in it for the long haul I aint lyin
Drummin comin from the streets get used to it
Better put yourself on lockdown I aint lyin

City is on fire
Mayors out kissing babies while the flames are getting higher
Get used to it aint lyin, I aint lyin



Bridge

Face in the mirror something bout it aint quite right
Try to shake it well, you can run but you cant hide


Drummin comin from the streets get used to it
Better put yourself on lockdown I aint lyin

You cant fight it
Theres a party and you aint invited
Gotta deal with that
City is on fire
Mayors out kissing babies while the flames are getting higher
Get used to it aint lyin

aint lyin


Copyright 2011
 
song itself earned 1.5 more stars. to bring us to 9.5 stars out of 10

by I subtracted .75 stars for the use of the mayor kissing babies lines....


you earned a sold 8.75 stars.........


you should be proud

the best cougarbait has ever done is 1.35 stars
 
You've got a great sound Muddy. I wouldn't say that to be nice either.

I love it. Entertaining as fuck too.

I like this edge you've got in the song. It's a progression from what I'm used to/expect from you....and it works.
 
aah, the long awaited release:clap:. The blues is in your blood pal. I would keep it shorter, add maybe a solo, less wordy. I particularly like the first verse, your style and intonation there. Bet you could do some good stuff adding a drum to it.