The Way You Move (New Song)

[Cougar Bait]

Second time running though it, needs some changes and maybe a break down part, just too fast all around, but I think there's a catchy song in there somewhere.

This is the first official posting of the new guitar, too bad my FLIP cam just sucks now, had to use the phone. Audio quality is a lot better on the FLIP.

The Way You Move

Tell me little girl what's your story
I paint pictures you steal the glory
Now I'm okay I don't know can't tell
Feelin so sinister here in the back row

I don't take it and I won't break it how it takes just to make you mine
Piss and grievin' just to hear you leavin' and I won't believe it till the sun don't shine
I see the way you move
And it's not gonna save me
I see the way you move
And it's not gonna save me too

Time took way too long hide your smile
Sit alone by the phone for awhile
Pretty little taste till some saved her
Pray for me father I've been a sinner

repeat chorus

 

[fiveteamer]

As soon as I finish beating off I'm going to give this the once-over.

 

[fiveteamer]

needs more synth.

 

[Archie]

I like it! like the chords on the chorus especially. reminds me of Bruce Springstein prob cause the tell me little girl intro.

Coug's when you gonna play at a Rockford bar?

 

[Cougar Bait]

I've already played at a bunch of Rockford bars. I wouldn't count that as too much of an accomplishment. There's only 150,000 people in this town. I am however going to start playing with a group next week, another singer (female) and another guitarist. Mostly just fucking around to start but they are both more talented than I am so I am excited.

 

[stevek173]

fuckin cool bro

you sound great

 

[reno cool]

nice couch. Good rhythm too, you play those three chords pretty well:

rhythm, what a word, 1 vowel in that word

 

[fiveteamer]

What are we drinking tonight Cougs?

 

[Archie]

nice couch. Good rhythm too, you play those three chords pretty well:

OMG

 

[Cougar Bait]

Fiver I am currently drinking Port Brewing Company Mongo IPA.

Reno I can play some different chords for you some other time. I can't play and sing complicated shit at the same time. I am just happy I got to the point where I can play and sing at the same time. Also, I am a singer/songwriter, not a guitar virtuoso. This is not news to most.

 

[reno cool]

I was being sincere. was referencing the comment you made in the other thread about only playing three chords.

 

[Cougar Bait]

Yeah, I know, I just wish I could play and sing complicated shit at the same time.

 

[fiveteamer]

I want to try Kid Rock's beer. He was on Triple D.

 

[Cougar Bait]

I am nearly certain Kid Rock's beer is awful. It has to be, right?

 

[fiveteamer]

He hired a master brewer. Michigan has A LOT of nice micro brewers. Hell, even the Wal Marts there carry them. I saw back in Christmas...

 

[Cougar Bait]

Yeah Walmart is known for it's quality beer selection

 

[Cougar Bait]

I changed the song up a bit, especially the tempo in the beginning, and am uploading the new version to YouTube now.

Sound quality should be better on this one as well, FLIP was working today.

Will post up new version shortly.

 

[Cougar Bait]

Okay new version, I like this a bit better. I am going to keep tweaking it and hopefully it will develop into something decent enough to record.